WALT:Describe a moment in time-1st attempt
A Moment In Time
Me and my family walked outside and saw that the whole town was nearly flooded with water. There was a black plastic float sitting on the top of the water surface. Me and my brother jumped on the float, we sat there with our feet in the cold, brown flood. My other brother was pulling us along, we went to look for our mother and father. As they had gone to make sure everyone had enough food and water, and were prepared to clear out at any moment. My heart sank as I saw a lady and her newborn baby running out of their house, she was unable to see the big rock in the way and tripped over, Me and my brothers ran over as fast as lightning, our heart skipping the next 5 beats. My oldest brother grabbed the baby, while me and my other brother lifted the lady up, she had hurt her ankle. So she had relied on me and my brothers to carry her and her newborn. Which she later named Elizabeth Harriet Chong. Named after me and my brother, as my other brother Jack insisted on her not being after him. But me and Harriet on the other hand were extremely grateful. Anyway after we saw our parents helping an old couple get to safety. We got everyone cleared out of the town and moved them the the nearest town. We double checked all the buildings to make sure no one got left behind. Weirdly enough my house had been robbed 2 months ago and I found my great great grandma’s necklace. It had been a family heirloom for many years, I thought I had lost it, I ran to my parents and brothers to ask who lived here. My mother and father said that it was a 32 year old man. We were the same age, anyway his name was Michel. I knew I had heard that name before but where?
To Be Continued
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